How should Superhuman sell their $40/m email

Rewriting landing page copy

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Old copy and current copy:

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Superhuman header copy

My updated version:

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Superhuman header copy - created by me

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Why I think it's better:

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1. Specific promise (100+ emails, 30 mins)

2. Clear outcome (inbox zero)

3. Risk-free CTA ("Try it free" removes barrier)

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